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Too Much Spare Time
Grunt
Posts: 31
(7/22/01 11:46 pm)
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BIG SHOCKER!
Here it is, Keensters.


The next installment of The Universe Is Toast!


It's also the most shocking Commander Keen plot-twist you're likely to see.


Grit your teeth, think of Earth, and click on the link below, to shiver into the Chasm Of Chills, where you will learn...


...THE SHOCKING, UNDENIABLE TRUTH!



(It may take a while to load, but it's worth it.)
And if you reply to this post, please don't spoil the surprise for those who haven't seen it yet. (-;

VolteFace 
Vortininja
Posts: 307
(7/23/01 12:53 am)
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Re: BIG SHOCKER!
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Edited by: VolteFace  at: 7/22/01 7:55:32 pm
Ilsoap
Vortininja
Posts: 217
(7/23/01 12:58 am)
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Whoa
That is AWESOME! It does explain a lot too...

Objects in computer screen may be closer than they appear.

VolteFace 
Vortininja
Posts: 308
(7/23/01 1:03 am)
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Re: Whoa
read the story first!
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AMAZING! Except the trying-to-kill-Mortimer with a handgun wasn't very keeny... neither was having Yorpy fall to an untimely (?) death.

Too Much Spare Time
Vortininja
Posts: 32
(7/23/01 2:49 am)
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Re: Whoa
Yeah. That's coz I deliberately made it in the style of a dramatic "comic book" comic, or a "Dragonball-Z" cartoon.


But yeah, come to think of it, kids playing with handguns is kind of less acceptable these days than what it was in ancient times...

Bang!
Ah, the early twentieth century, eh?

Forge315
Vortininja
Posts: 178
(7/23/01 2:22 pm)
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Re: Whoa
WoW! LOL!

That was good. Who would have thought that of Mortimer.

I think it was good use in the last clip on the comic to have Keen’s head stretch up and down; just like the ending to Keen4.

VF4588
Vortininja
Posts: 258
(7/26/01 9:18 am)
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Re: Whoa
Oooh ya spoiled it for me!! ;)
I saw fast trough it and the read "Who would have thought that of Mortimer." So I kinda understanded it without reading it!

Still havent READ it but it looks good, ill read it soon :D

vf4588@sdent.every1.net · homepage · ck nexus · stardust

Too Much Spare Time
Vortininja
Posts: 36
(7/27/01 11:36 am)
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Re: Whoa
Oh, no, nobody's posts in this topic have spoiled the shocker, yet. If you think that Mortimer not being dead after all is shocking, then I don't want to think about how surprised you'll be when you read the comic and find out what the REAL big shocker is!

Too Much Spare Time
Vortininja
Posts: 39
(8/1/01 3:01 am)
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One to go!
The penultimate chapter in my TUIT-conclusion comic has just been posted at the Chasm Of Chills. In this episode, the problem with the mouth-protector on Billy's brother's helmet is resolved.

www.geocities.com/chasm_o...index.html

How's it all gonna end?

* Will Mortimer chop off Billy's hand with a light-saber?

* Will Yorpy return as a Force-Ghost, urging "Run, Billy, Run!" in an echoey Force-voice?

* Will Billy discover that Princess Lindsey is his twin sister?

* Will Duke Nukem leap in and shoot Mortimer to shreds, to get 1000 points?

More family secrets to be exposed in the dramatic conclusion... coming soon to the Chasm Of Chills!

VolteFace 
Vortininja
Posts: 328
(8/1/01 2:47 pm)
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Re: One to go!
This is great! I found a bunch of spelling errors though...

Forge315
Vortininja
Posts: 219
(8/2/01 1:31 am)
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Re: One to go!
Hahahahaahahahahahahahahahaha! LOL! That was the best yet. The climax really got me laughing.

Do you do comics for a living or something?

Too Much Spare Time
Vortininja
Posts: 41
(8/2/01 1:43 am)
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Re: One to go!
Or something... yeah... heh heh.
Actually, it's the other way around: I live to do comics.
Occasionally I get paid good amounts of $ to draw caricatures of people, but until I find a way of making reliable income from cartooning, I'll continue studying for my computer science degree.

geocities.com/toomuchspar...chives.htm

mikew
Grunt
Posts: 30
(8/7/01 3:49 am)
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Re: One to go!
keep going; i'm really enjoying the story
thanks a lot mate :)

mike

XkyRauh2001 
Vortininja
Posts: 68
(8/13/01 8:42 am)
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dude!
that profile shot of Keen on the lower-right of the page is awesome :-) by far my favorite doodle you've done of him. you've got a killer art style, man, keep up the great work

btw, I'M BACK from my vacation--yaay!

--Xky

Heads up for that CatterKiller...! Sonic, Lemmings, Commander Keen, Earthbound, Final Fantasy, Kirby, Chrono Trigger... Quite a Mix, if you ask me ^_^

Lagularity
Grunt
Posts: 15
(8/14/01 9:22 am)
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Re: BIG SHOCKER!
One thing about it thou....its not undeniable; there could be alotta other explanations (plus its not practical cause then Mort couldn't return home without everyone knowing)

-KeenEmpire

Too Much Spare Time
Vortininja
Posts: 48
(8/15/01 10:28 am)
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Re: BIG SHOCKER!
Aha, ha ha. Yes, it's almost TOO impractical, isn't it?!
After I post the finale and then the epilogue (both under construction right now), I might explore a number of "alternative endings" - eg, the Disney ending, the "X-Files" ending, the Gilbert & Sullivan ending, the Scooby-Doo ending, the (original) Planet Of The Apes ending, the Really-Bad-Primary-School-Christmas-Pageant ending, the Star Wars ending, the "And Then I Woke Up" ending (NOOOO...), the Matrix ending... any more ideas?

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