| 
Author
 | 
Comment
 | 
 Slasher    
 Vortininja  
 
Posts: 89 
 
(11/28/02 10:26:59 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
 | 
 Spork III 
   
 
Would you guys rather have a complete game or a complete comic? 
Edited by: Slasher    at: 11/28/02 10:29:01 pm
  | 
  chogall 
 Vorticon Elder  
 
Posts: 1124 
 
(11/28/02 11:36:26 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
  ezSupporter  
 | 
 Re: Spork III 
 Ooo! Nifty! 
 
Personally, I'd rather have a complete comic. 
 | 
 Flaose 
 Pooper, King of the Slugs  
 
Posts: 483 
 
(11/29/02 12:28:36 am) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Re: Spork III 
 I as well. 
-------------------- 
Cerebral Cortex 314 - For All of your Commander Keen Needs.  | 
 Ilsoap 
 Flect  
 
Posts: 522 
 
(11/29/02 1:35:34 am) 
   Reply
 
  
 | 
 Re: Spork III 
 Me too. 
Objects in computer screen may be closer than they appear.  | 
 Djaser 
 Vorticon Elite  
 
Posts: 458 
 
(11/29/02 1:05:07 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Re: Spork III 
 I'd rather have the game.... 
-----Djaser est un nation prétendue neutre mais, dans la réalité, il ne l'est pas car il n'arrête pas d'être envahie par les uns et sauvés par les autres.  
Djaser est normalement régie par une féodalité...-----  | 
 Forge315    
 Grand Intellect  
 
Posts: 1082 
 
(11/29/02 4:40:53 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
 | 
 . 
 The comic, unless it would be a none cnc type game. 
 | 
 Slasher    
 Vortininja  
 
Posts: 90 
 
(11/29/02 6:07:58 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Right 
 Comic it is. Sorry Djaser. Would the traditional milky-white skin color be preferred over the skin-color seen above? 
-------- 
   | 
 Forge315    
 Grand Intellect  
 
Posts: 1084 
 
(11/29/02 8:51:47 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
 | 
 :) 
 Nope,    
 | 
 Flaose 
 Pooper, King of the Slugs  
 
Posts: 486 
 
(11/29/02 9:52:03 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Re: :) 
 No, colored is good. 
-------------------- 
Cerebral Cortex 314 - For All of your Commander Keen Needs.  | 
 commanderklown 
 Vortininja  
 
Posts: 88 
 
(11/29/02 11:43:19 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
 | 
 game 
 please do the game 
   
 | 
 Slasher    
 Vortininja  
 
Posts: 92 
 
(11/30/02 12:49:51 am) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Testing testing 1 2 3 
 Here's what the first page looks like. 
 
  
 
Comments on the look, the humor? 
-------- 
   | 
 Nospike88 
 Vortininja  
 
Posts: 215 
 
(11/30/02 2:14:06 am) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Re: Testing testing 1 2 3 
 Look's good so far   . I can't make out the image in the first frame though... 
 That's one doomed space marine - Duke Nukem 
  | 
 Flaose 
 Pooper, King of the Slugs  
 
Posts: 488 
 
(11/30/02 2:59:39 am) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Re: Testing testing 1 2 3 
 I love it!    
-------------------- 
Cerebral Cortex 314 - For All of your Commander Keen Needs.  | 
 Djaser 
 Vorticon Elite  
 
Posts: 466 
 
(12/1/02 9:48:23 am) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Re: Testing testing 1 2 3 
 It's a lot better than I had expected. But is the game canceled    ? 
-----Djaser est un nation prétendue neutre mais, dans la réalité, il ne l'est pas car il n'arrête pas d'être envahie par les uns et sauvés par les autres.  
Djaser est normalement régie par une féodalité...-----  | 
 Slasher    
 Vortininja  
 
Posts: 96 
 
(12/1/02 9:53:00 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Hmm 
 I think Spork III will pretty much be done through comic book. I do, however, hope to do more Commander Keen related projects in the future. If I'm gonna' make a game, I'll be doing my best to get back to the routes of Commander Keen, you know, a cartoony, fun environment, as opposed to sticking a keen sprite in the middle of a pre-rendered world (which was the problem with Spork II and the demo for III) 
-------- 
   | 
 Slasher    
 Vortininja  
 
Posts: 97 
 
(12/2/02 7:05:52 am) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Yeah 
 So uh... would you guys rather have like a page a week, or just wait until I'm all done and get it all at once? 
-------- 
   | 
 Forge315    
 Grand Intellect  
 
Posts: 1090 
 
(12/2/02 7:54:44 am) 
   Reply
 
  
 | 
 comment 
 I’ll be honest, it don’t think it’s funny, thought it is 'very' well drawn. 
 
Two pages every two weeks would be in my liking,    
 | 
 Slasher    
 Vortininja  
 
Posts: 98 
 
(12/2/02 8:02:33 am) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Wait and see 
 Oh the funny, it will come. This is more of just setting things up. 
 
  
 
There's the second page, not so funny. The funny will come though! 
-------- 
   | 
 Bloogaurd 
 Vortininja  
 
Posts: 109 
 
(12/2/02 1:25:27 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
 | 
 Hmmm. 
 Well it's ummm, well, I give it a eight out of ten. 
 | 
 Slasher    
 Vortininja  
 
Posts: 99 
 
(12/2/02 3:14:32 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Uh... Thanks, I think. 
 It's better than a 7. 
-------- 
   | 
 Djaser 
 Vorticon Elite  
 
Posts: 474 
 
(12/2/02 5:50:43 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Re: Uh... Thanks, I think. 
 ...and it is less than a nine. 
-----Djaser est un nation prétendue neutre mais, dans la réalité, il ne l'est pas car il n'arrête pas d'être envahie par les uns et sauvés par les autres.  
Djaser est normalement régie par une féodalité...-----  | 
  chogall 
 Vorticon Elder  
 
Posts: 1127 
 
(12/2/02 6:49:40 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
  ezSupporter  
  
 | 
 Re: Uh... Thanks, I think. 
 Oh, give him a break already! When I read a book, I don't judge it from the first two pages. Do you? 
 | 
 Snaily 
 Messie  
 
Posts: 666 
 
(12/2/02 7:25:18 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Re: Uh... Thanks, I think. 
 I love the way Spot looks in the second picture. 
________ 
 
¨@_  | 
 Forge315    
 Grand Intellect  
 
Posts: 1091 
 
(12/2/02 8:34:51 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
 | 
 . 
 Spot looks great, and the second part is better,    
 | 
 Slasher    
 Vortininja  
 
Posts: 105 
 
(12/3/02 4:45:40 am) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Yeah... 
 If there's stuff about it you guys could do without, feel free to be specific. Saying it's not that great doesn't help me improve anything. 
-------- 
   | 
 KeenCommander 
 Vorticon Elite  
 
Posts: 457 
 
(12/3/02 3:37:15 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Re: Uh... Thanks, I think. 
 More, More!   ...please? 
 | 
 Superadammario64 
 Vortininja  
 
Posts: 85 
 
(12/3/02 8:48:00 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Re: Uh... Thanks, I think. 
 Hey that looks cool.  
 | 
 Djaser 
 Vorticon Elite  
 
Posts: 477 
 
(12/4/02 4:52:28 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Re: Uh... Thanks, I think. 
 ( Oh, give him a break already! When I read a book, I don't judge it from the first two pages. Do you? ) 
 
Sorry, I forgot to say I was just ironic    ! 
-----Djaser est un nation prétendue neutre mais, dans la réalité, il ne l'est pas car il n'arrête pas d'être envahie par les uns et sauvés par les autres.  
Djaser est normalement régie par une féodalité...-----  | 
 XkyRauh2001    
 Mortimer's Right Hand Man  
 
Posts: 457 
 
(12/5/02 7:35:02 am) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 ooh! 
 here's a small bit of advice--try to break yourself away from the square panel format.  try triangles, rectangles, breaks, uneven spacing, anything to bust the monotony.  as it is so far, it looks very boring visually, despite how good the artwork is--there's potential for some interesting layout if you put your mind to it :-) 
 
good luck, and fantastic work so far--your facial expressions are... uh... expressive, for lack of a better word ^_^ the characters are very animated.  the way Norp/Spot stretches to get on the bench is GREAT! 
 
--Xky 
 | 
 Bloogaurd 
 Vortininja  
 
Posts: 114 
 
(12/13/02 1:35:42 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
 | 
 Re: 
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 
Oh, give him a break already! When I read a book, I don't judge it from the first two pages. Do you?  
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 
 
Na, other wise I wouldn't of finished Lord of the Rings:1 because, god, that beginning was so boring (but the rest was awsome!) Spork1,2 I didn't like because it eas so darn hard. I couldn't finish 1 level in 2nd game, however the 1st spork3 demo sucked, but I LOVE the 2nd demo and this comic strip is pretty good: 4\10 humur 
10\10 grafix and 8\10 for all. 
 
   nice new emoticons! 
 | 
 KeenRush    
 Garg  
 
Posts: 1559 
 
(12/13/02 6:51:47 pm) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 Re: Re: 
 I haven't even noticed this topic! 
 
Great work!! More please!    
The universe is not toast!  | 
 XkyRauh2001    
 Mortimer's Right Hand Man  
 
Posts: 464 
 
(12/14/02 12:52:21 am) 
   Reply
 
  
  
 | 
 ok... 
 alright, i got somethin' here... how come the "G" on Keen's helmet is backwards in the last panel of the first page?  in all the Keen games, the G is the correct facing always (go ahead and correct me if i'm wrong)...  is this a stylistic change on your part, or did you flip the panel when photoshopping it? 
 
--Xky 
 |