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KeenRush Garg Posts: 2398 (2/24/03 7:23 am) Reply	Keen Emoticon Story (continue it) Well, I think this is stupid idea, but whatever. Nobody continues this anyways.. Well, continue the story using those emoticons to tell what Keen feels, and for other stuff. Hard to explain, hope you get the point from this post I post. I'll start: One day, our hero, Billy Blaze -- Commander Keen, came home after dinnertime!! He had been pogoing the whole day. Because that was so fun , he didn't notice how fast time went. "I don't think they have even noticed that I was away", Keen thinks. He opens the door, and steps inside.. [What happens then? Continue!] Greetings from Bloogton Tower!
XkyRauh2001 Mortimer's Right Hand Man Posts: 505 (2/24/03 7:44 am) Reply	(probably the only time i'll ever do this) Gargs. Many Gargs. Keen was a bit surprised but it was nothing he couldn't handle [then what happened? and why all the Gargs?] --Xky
Yorparoony Meep Posts: 2 (2/24/03 9:55 am) Reply	WABAM a vortacon jumps out and says " IM TAKING REVENGE ON YOU FOR KILLING MANY OF MY KIND AND I HAVE A ARMY OR GARGS " Keen looked suprised and Says"But Im a hero to your kind" and giggles to him self [What will happen Next???]
LinkTempletonTM Vortininja Posts: 152 (2/24/03 4:25 pm) Reply	Story The Gargs got mad and beat up Keen . But then Yorpy comes outside and drags Keen inside. Keen recovers and decides to have a smoke . But they werent methnols so he started to get quesy . Then he threw up . Since he threw up all his lunch he got the munchies and decided to eat some cake . As he was cutting a piece the Gargs broke in!!!
KeenRush Garg Posts: 2401 (2/24/03 4:40 pm) Reply	Re: WABAM Then Billy's mom comes to room: "WHAT ARE THESE GREEN ONE AND TWO EYED THINGS IN THIS ROOM!?! And where were you all the day!" "Mom! You don't understand! Those are dangerous creatures that are going to attack me!" [To be continued.. I hope..] Greetings from Bloogton Tower!
KeenCommander Vorticon Elite Posts: 580 (2/24/03 4:50 pm) Reply	Re: WABAM "I'll bet Mortimer McMire is somehow behind this," said Keen angrily . pulling out his new fully-automatic neural stunner, keen quickly stunned the garg army . "Good job, dear, now go get ready for bed. your dad and I are going out to the club ," said his mom. "Aw, mom, can't I pulease , stay up? I wanna watch this cool vampire movie." no, and take spot up to your room with you. [wheyooo, this is GREAT]
Xtraverse Stranded Fish Posts: 1442 (2/24/03 5:35 pm) Reply	Re: WABAM At the club, Billy's parents run into a fellow who seems extremely nice and buys them a round of drinks. After Billy's parents are drunk enough, the man takes off his disguise heads towards Billy's home. Edited by: Xtraverse at: 2/24/03 5:36:53 pm
Djaser Vorticon Elite Posts: 963 (2/24/03 6:18 pm) Reply	Re: WABAM Suprise Suprise the man was Mortimer . However Spot spoted him before the man came to Billys home. Spot hurried to Billy . However Keen still lay in his bed . Billy quike waked up and turned into commander Keen . -----Djaser est un nation pr�tendue neutre mais, dans la r�alit�, il ne l'est pas car il n'arr�te pas d'�tre envahie par les uns et sauv�s par les autres. Djaser est normalement r�gie par une f�odalit�...-----
Grelphy Vortininja Posts: 69 (2/24/03 8:28 pm) Reply	poof interesting... Anyway, Commander Keen was able to send Mort retreating into the night amid a hail of neural stuns. (no neural stunner emotikeen!) Keen then tuned into "galactic world news" with his Phototachyon Transciever. {okay, what's he hear? among other big questions... Why the gargs, for instance. } Check out my webpage: nweb.pct.edu/homepage/student/BOYWIL61/
KeenRush Garg Posts: 2406 (2/25/03 8:33 am) Reply	Re: poof Image from CC314.. First he couldn't hear anything. But then he found something odd radiostation he had never listened. Brrrzzzzz.. CChhhhzzzhhzz.. The earth will be.. Zzhhhhrrrr.. Omegamatic will be rebuild! Chhhzzz.. Ffrrr.. laughing "What does this mean?!", Keen thinks. [Well, what does it mean?] Greetings from Bloogton Tower!
cybernetic dream Vortininja Posts: 95 (2/25/03 1:42 pm) Reply	. suddenly, a lot of , and s came in! sais: 'oh no! someone heard our plans about rebuilding the Omegamatic' But billy was quick enough to put on a disguise , and they didn't recognise him. They all left his room, and started the chase on .. COMMANDER KEEN!
Grelphy Vortininja Posts: 81 (2/25/03 8:05 pm) Reply	Re: . Hmm... You can continue twice, right? Anyway(again), Commander Keen Hopped in his hand-dandy Bean-With-Bacon-Megarocket and blasted off for the far reaches of the galaxy. As keen approached Gnosticus IV to get info from the oracle (Need "council memeber" emotikeen!) He diskcoveres that Mort has allied all of the evil aliens!!! GAAAAAARRRRGGG!!! Check out my webpage: nweb.pct.edu/homepage/student/BOYWIL61/
KeenRush Garg Posts: 2422 (2/26/03 9:15 am) Reply	Re: . Keen lands on Gnosticus IV. It looks peaceful place like usually, but then something happens.. Council Page jumps out of somewhere and attacks Keen! AAAARRGGHHH! Keen reacts fast like usually, and one later there's no worry about Council Page. Accidentally he hears very familiar voice saying: "Attack! Bwahahahaha!" Group of gargs appear behind the corner (of a house near Keen).. "GAAAAAAAAAAAARRRGG!" [This story repeats itself, but what's gonna happen next?!?] Greetings from Bloogton Tower!
Djaser Vorticon Elite Posts: 969 (2/26/03 6:16 pm) Reply	Re: . 'No !!!!!! I won't let this all happen again ,' Keem said, And keen quikly flew to the repared ammagedon machine and let it explode so that the Gargs, Mort , and Keen were dead . THE END???? or isn't it ? I suggest someone continue were Keenrush ended -----Djaser est un nation pr�tendue neutre mais, dans la r�alit�, il ne l'est pas car il n'arr�te pas d'�tre envahie par les uns et sauv�s par les autres. Djaser est normalement r�gie par une f�odalit�...-----
S3 Meep Posts: 2 (2/27/03 6:08 am) Reply	Re: . no, i'm c'ing from urs Suddenly Keen realises he's just blown up the whole universe except a small bit. Oh great thinks keen, and gets a message from mortimer saying that the chicken has just crossed the road. "WHAT IS THIS SUPPOSED TO MEAN" says keen, very angry "You see, it is a magic chicken. It will make the universe return, but designed completely for shikadi." said Keen couldn't think of a better reply than to moon Mort so that's what he did "And also... you will turn into a Shikadi as well. HA HA HA!" said Mortimer "AND HOW ARE YOU ALIVE?" demanded Keen "Good question. It was a robot, not the real me, that you killed." said mortimer, laughing his head off [someone else continue this, it's so cool!] Edited by: S3 at: 2/27/03 6:10:19 am
KeenRush Garg Posts: 2430 (2/27/03 7:27 pm) Reply	Re: . [Welcome to forums, by the way!] Keen sees Mortimer laughing his head off. Is Mort finally dead? Keen goes to look the head, but notices that it isn't real. It was robot too. The head started to make beeping noise, and Keen heard numbers counting down. "5.. 4.. 3.. 2.. 1.. 0.. --- Goodbye, Captain!" Keen realized: It's a bomb! He jumped away with his pogo , and just in time. [Then??] Greetings from Bloogton Tower!
Grelphy Vortininja Posts: 104 (2/28/03 12:17 am) Reply	. ...All of a sudden, the universe became shiikadi-fied. Great, muttered Keen. Although being a shikadi is fun... Keen ZZZZAP!!s a nearby mad mushroom. Cool! says Keen [I like Shikadi, in case you haven't noticed.......] You and all those other mental wimps deserve to die! -Mortimer Mcmire in Commander Keen 3
S3 Grunt Posts: 18 (2/28/03 4:59 am) Reply	Re: . Suddenly, a Garg runs up to keen keen notices that it is also Shikadi-fied, although it kept it's garg shape "I HATE THIS SHIKADIFICATION" says the garg and charges keen down However, Keen remembered that Shikadi take four hits to kill, so he was still alive Just then, Norp came up to keen, also Shikadified. "I'll help you out!" he said. Mortimer - was nearby, lhao(laughing his you-know-what off) - keen noticed he hadn't been shikadified, so he must be another robot clone "Your plan failed. Even if the universe is Shikadi-fied, everyone lived. And I bet I know someone who can reverse it!" said Keen, lying about knowing who can reverse it "I know you don't know someone who can reverse it, because reversing it can't be done," said mortimer, laughing even more than usual , "because I can see right through you." Keen laughed but only at the joke, not at anything else. Mortimer was laughing so much, the robot burst into pieces. <--woulda put mort there except there isn't one of him [time for another person or shikadi to continue]
grafix5000 Vortininja Posts: 41 (2/28/03 8:47 am) Reply	Re: . How long has this topic been here? The blast from the robot nearly fried Keens face but he rubbed off the smoke by rolling on the ground. As Robo-Mortimer had gone , Keen decided he'd use the pieces to build a time machine ! Keen connected the pieces wearing his special welding glasses banged, bashed and bonked Robo-Mort's chips into place. At last happy with his work Keen had a smoke (where does he get them? He's only 8 ) , flicked the 'power' switch on the control panel and... [to be continued, again ] ------------------------------------------------------------ Life is just a distraction from Commander Keen. Everyone knows that... ------------------------------------------------------------ Edited by: grafix5000 at: 2/28/03 8:53:20 am
KeenRush Garg Posts: 2438 (2/28/03 4:42 pm) Reply	Re: Keen Emoticon Story (continue it) ..set the date to go. He thought that he could get back in time and make sure that this all won't ever happen! Just before Keen pressed "Go" button, a guard robot like he had seen in Mars came and shot a nice four-in-a-row-ammo at him! Keen's time machine damaged a bit. It got other date to go! The day was 03/08/1972! Keen disappeared the current time.. [Time travelling..] Greetings from Bloogton Tower!
Djaser Vorticon Elite Posts: 982 (2/28/03 5:47 pm) Reply	Re: . Our Heroe landed somewhere on earth . Keen noticed that the people didn't look the same as in 1990 . All those people looked very strange like , and . And Keen even saw a it must have been almost Christmas. Keen was hungry and went to a local restaurant. I'd like to have a hotdog sir? I am sorry young sir we don't sell hotdogs we are in England . Keen said how do I get out of here . Suddenly attacked Keen. But Keen quickly pogoed away from them -----Djaser est un nation pr�tendue neutre mais, dans la r�alit�, il ne l'est pas car il n'arr�te pas d'�tre envahie par les uns et sauv�s par les autres. Djaser est normalement r�gie par une f�odalit�...----- Edited by: Djaser at: 2/28/03 5:51:14 pm
S3 Grunt Posts: 23 (2/28/03 10:13 pm) Reply	Re: Keen Emoticon Story (continue it) Keen suddenly remembered that gargs and yorps weren't supposed to have existed at all back then(he had finally worked out that the time machine played up - he worked it out because there were still on the earth) "Those damned things must have used my time machine. And even though I'm unshikadified, and so are some of them, most of them aren't!" thought keen, who was getting angry Suddenly, Mortimer appeared "Ha ha ha. Keen, do you realise that this new universe had anti-timereverse? Anyone who tried it would just be teleported away and maybe unshikadified. You're actually on the rebuild of Gnosticnus IV(is that how you spell it, and is that the correct number?)." said mort "I won't let you win!" said Keen, starting to get a bit confused even with his IQ of 314 "Oh, but you see, you don't have to let me win. You already have... or at least, I've already won." said Mort Suddenly, keen hears a voice coming from the shadows. "Come... come to Fribbulus Xax... us, the Bloogs, will help you..." Although keen doesn't want to trust the bloogs, he decides he has to. He works on a new BWB rocket, and he's happy when it's finished, stronger than the other one! "Right" thought keen, "Off to Fribbulus Xax. I'll have to try trusting the Bloogs. If they don't help, maybe the Vorticons will be back to normal, and I could ask them." And he hopped in his new rocket, which he called Dopefish Plus +, and sped off to Fribbulus Xax
Yorparoony Grunt Posts: 14 (3/1/03 2:50 am) Reply	on Fribbulus Xax once he got to Fribbulus Xax he looked around "where are the bloog" keen says after he yawned somthing hit keen on the back of the head "TONK" he looked behind him and saw a bloog behind a tree, "i threw the rock at you to get your attention" What happend next?
S3 Grunt Posts: 28 (3/1/03 3:14 am) Reply	Re: Keen Emoticon Story (continue it) The bloog said "Welcome to Fribbulus Xax. We need your help, and unless you know someone else who can help you, you need ours." Keen replied "Well, I do know someone... or should I say something... else, but I only thought about them in case you were tricking. It seems you aren't." The Bloog replied "We have some sort of machine Mort gave us a while ago, which was supposed to transform Shikadi into other things - removing their Shikadi powers, and giving them the powers of whatever they turn into. We've never been able to get it to do anything except turn Shockshunds into Blooglets, Shikadi into Bloogs and Shikadi Masters into Blooguards." Keen replied "Hmmm... I'll need to see this machine... where is it?", quite confused Suddenly, Mort appeared. "Ha ha ha! I have you where I want you!" "So, you WERE tricking!" Keen said to the bloog, angry at himself for falling for the trick "Oh no, they aren't." said Mort. "I figured they'd think of working with you to restore stuff. And now I can kill you. You see, I have developed a new weapon. A gun that shoots a substance called Kadia 34, which was discovered by the Shikadi, mixed with energy extracted from living Shikadified creatures - mainly Vorticons and Gargs." "So what?" said Keen "When mixed, they create what I call Shundis, which comes from Shockshund, as Shockshunds already have a small bit of Kadia 34 in them, unlike all other kadial creatures. Did you not notice that Shockshunds are deadlier in ways other than their speed and all that?" said mort, laughing even more "And what's so special about this Shundis?" said Keen, getting really annoyed "It will cause big explosions on contact with anything except gold. That's why my gun is made of gold. I could probably blow up Fribbulus Xax, Korath 3 and Vorticon VI combined with 2mls of Shundis. The gold on the planets is all that will remain. So imagine the power of one shot, which is about 14mls each shot!" said Mort, laughing so much "Oh damn!" thought Keen [what's going to happen now?]
Yorparoony Grunt Posts: 15 (3/1/03 8:52 am) Reply	loading the gun pull the mix of Shundis out of his pocket puts 1/4 mls in his gun "thats just enough Shundis to kill you ahahah HAHAHAHAH EHEHEHHEHEHE AHAHAHHA" mort says keen looked stunned from all the shock or morts new gun "oh no you dont" yells keen and he pulls out his trusty stungun thats when mort threw a rock at keen gun and knoked it out his hand "i wish i made a spear gun" keen sobs to himself mort cleanches the trigger and fires "ZAP ZORT ZORG" "WHAT! WHY DID MY GUN SHUTDOWN?????" he pulls the gun mix out his pocket reads the lable : SODIUM CHORITE : "CRAP I TOOK THE WRONG MIXTRURE, I GOT SODIUM CHORITE INSTED OF SHUNDIS" Keen laughs out loud and he pickes up his stungun and zaps mort <>----{[ What Happens Next? ]}----<>
Yorparoony Grunt Posts: 22 (3/1/03 10:36 am) Reply	Re: Keen Emoticon Story (continue it) As Mort sat there stunned like a stone, keen and the bloog run off the one of the meany abanden wearhouses, "here is the macheine" said the bloog "Whats the problem with it?" asked keen "I ALLREADY SAID THE PROBLEM, WERNT YOU LISTENING?" the bloog yelld "umm... no" keen said " anywayz We have some sort of machine Mort gave us a while ago, which was supposed to transform Shikadi into other things - removing their Shikadi powers, and giving them the powers of whatever they turn into. We've never been able to get it to do anything except turn Shockshunds into Blooglets, Shikadi into Bloogs and Shikadi Masters into Blooguards" said the bloog in a understanding voice. keen looks and wonders "oh i see" says keen keen thinks how to fix macheine ill just put on my working glasses "YOUREKA!, iv got it, i need it swich the discombozulater to the moosorontilater and then the dohicky to the qulazmanoof and that should do it" "now lets see if it works" in a scintificla voice the bloog walkes in to the machine and all this mist comes out and.. Meanwhile mort is still stunned <>---{[ What Happens Next? ]}---<> <>--{[ Our Hero Commander Keen ]}--<>
Yorparoony Grunt Posts: 24 (3/1/03 10:53 am) Reply	Re: loading the gun Out of the mist comes a...... COMANDER CLONE!!!!!! clone said "what did you turn me into?" "Me" says keen "no, im talking about me not you" says commander clone "i turned you into me, So now there are to of us" says keen "but the only think diffrent is your face, it lookes like this" keen says as he pickes up some glass from the floor the bloog looks in to the glass and see's his reflection ZORT ZAP ZOOG "Whats that" keen says, "the machine is making another commander clone" said commander clone the clone walked out and said OINK! "HE IS A COMMANDER PIG!!!" keen and commander clone#1 said.... and who are these new commander clones ??? <>--{[ What Happend Next? ]}--<> <>--{[ Our Hero Commander Keen ]}--<>
S3 Vortininja Posts: 41 (3/1/03 8:04 pm) Reply	Re: Keen Emoticon Story (continue it) Suddenly Mort is unstunned. He walks in, and says "I thought you might use that. Well, you see, I deactivated it while Shikadifying the universe. It just creates lots of Commander XXXXs, that are actually just Shikadis wearing costumes, sometimes it might be a Shockshund as well. Oh, here comes a Shockshund one! HAHAHA! Commander Dog!" lol lol "WHAT THE?" said Keen, as Commander Vorticon came out As Vorticons know a lot about computers and machinery(a bunch of them having invented a 6500mhz processor the size of a lick and 2gig ram chips that are the size of a schoolfish), CV said "When you turn off this machine, we will all disappear. Neither you, nor us, nor the bloogs, nor anything else other than Mortimer, can solve this. Come to Vorticon VI, but bring as many recruits as you can." "What should I bring?" said Keen, stunning Mort again The Vorticon said "Well, first, at least 25 Bloogs, all non-Shikadified if possible. Then, at least 10 Scotties - it doesn't matter if they are Shikadified. Some Slugs and Licks will help, if you can get them to join you, but if not, don't worry. Don't bother with s and s, we've already gathered plenty. Oh yeah, they might not sound like they can help, but bring some as well." Keen was confused , and didn't know how he was going to get all those things into his BWB Megarocket, but the Bloogs said they'd provide fourteen Bloog3 Spaceships, the best type available so far in the Fribbulus system. Before leaving, he got his Wrist Computer OS upgraded to Bloogonix, the latest Bloog operating system. After playing Garg Wars, an RTS game that came with the system(Garg Wars was Keen's favourite game on there - he could choose to play as Yorps, Gargs or Vorticons each time he played, he chose Yorps most of the time) at least 10 times, he arrived Vorticon VI with all his recruits. (and more) [who's gonna continue it?]
Yorparoony Grunt Posts: 25 (3/2/03 10:28 am) Reply	Re: loading the gun When Keen arrived he was greeted by the vortacon Queen "Welcome back Commander Keen" says the vortacon Queen as keen smiles "when you where here last time you killed meany of our kind with your original gun, the one that dous not stun" said the Vortacon Queen "and now we are out to kill you, REVENGE!!!" Yells the Queen " THIS JUST KEEPS GETING BETTER AND BETTER" keen says with sarcasem. "well, this is what you get" kees says as he pulles his pants down A ninja vortacon jumps out of the bush and kicks keen in the gut! <>---{[ What Happens Next? ]}---<> <>--{[ Our Hero Commander Keen ]}--<>
S3 Vortininja Posts: 61 (3/3/03 4:13 am) Reply	Re: Keen Emoticon Story (continue it) KABOOM! One of the Slugs had, at that time, done a small lump of slime on a computer of the Vorticon's. In a flash, the vorticons were back to being keen's allies again. "Sorry about that, it was that Mortimer idiot again." said the Vortiqueen. "We are still researching on stuff, we didn't expect you that quick. We have good homes for all the creatures. The gargs and yorps can go over there. Here's a pond for the Dopefish . The slugs can go in the Slime-Protected zone over there. The other creatures can go wherever they want." "So" said keen "what exactly must we do?" "Well, give us your wrist computer and we will upgrade it so that you can log into UVNet from up to 46.3 trillion lightyears away" said the Vortiqueen "and then use it to log on. The information is stored in the main computer." "UVNet?" said Keen, even more confused "It's the Vorticon network. UVNet stands for Ultra Vort Network" said the queen A few hours later, his wrist computer was upgraded. He checked it to make sure it didn't have any bombs or other stuff in it, then he turned it on, and logged on to UVNet. After getting all the information he could about the plan, he logged off. He noticed that the old KeenOS operating system had been replaced with Vorticon Mini 3, the latest Vorticon operating system. He also noticed he had the most powerful processor available for wrist computers, the Vortix Mini 3500 (which was 3500mhz or 3.5ghz if you didn't work it out yourself), and a total of 3gb of RAM! "Wow!" thought Keen "this thing is more powerful than the most powerful computer on earth! Although it doesn't have as much storage space, it only has 14gb." "Well" said the Vortiqueen "we're ready."
S3 Vortininja Posts: 230 (3/21/03 8:54 am) Reply	Re: loading the gun After a lot of planning, everyone was ready. Meanwhile, Mortimer had gone off to Everintis planet, because it was the hometown of the only creatures that still remained on Mortimer's side. He laughed as much as usual when he found out that Keen was working with Mortimer's former allies. "Don't you worry!" said an Everint. "Yes, Keen and his army will be dead!" said another. (okay, you continue - i was really just putting this back up so that someone else could continue it) http://scomps.freehomepage.com/ <---S-Computers Home Page